Okay, I can follow this train of thought. Unfortunately, Sal has one hugely major flaw in his logic: Author didn't choose him the first time around and has absolutely no reason to do so now. Less, even, if she finds out he killed people to bring her back. I mean, that would be a moajor turn-off for /me/...
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Date: Oct. 24th, 2011 10:45 pm (UTC)Nice story, Katri!