Wow! That explains the more than usual relationships shown in the chapter, particularly Carl and her two girlfriends as well as the love triangle between Cho, Nicholas, and Eric.
I totally understand that if the Sal plotline keeps going, the entire story would lose the fact that it's a legacy. I guess it's for the greater good in terms of story progression.
That was a lot of great staging you have there! It really fits into everyone's reaction to Sal's presence. And the part where Bill attacks Sal is well-staged.
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Date: Feb. 13th, 2012 12:36 am (UTC)I totally understand that if the Sal plotline keeps going, the entire story would lose the fact that it's a legacy. I guess it's for the greater good in terms of story progression.
That was a lot of great staging you have there! It really fits into everyone's reaction to Sal's presence. And the part where Bill attacks Sal is well-staged.
Thanks for sharing these!