Update, at long last!
Oct. 13th, 2013 10:19 pmIt's been a while, hasn't it? Well, real life has been throwing me around this year some, as you probably know. But in the end, I still managed to pull an update together. Without further ado, here it is: Villains or heroes?, chapter one!

Again, bad guys use bad words occasionally, but shouldn't be extreme. Both Slideshare and Scribd versions available, whichever works best for you (to me, the picture quality on Scribd seems somewhat better). I hope you enjoy!

Again, bad guys use bad words occasionally, but shouldn't be extreme. Both Slideshare and Scribd versions available, whichever works best for you (to me, the picture quality on Scribd seems somewhat better). I hope you enjoy!
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Date: Oct. 14th, 2013 06:07 am (UTC)I knew Sal’s “friends” were gonna use him and take the credit for all the effort he made. Their desire to get out of Strangetown without regard to other people’s safety is selfish. And I don’t believe what Seth said that they’ll give the credit to Sal and his family once the apoc’s done. Those folks are really sly foxes in plain sight.
Now on to happier things. Nice to see that Sal lifted Intelligence and Hopelessness. That will come in handy when it comes to socializing with others. And I also like how you’ve managed to persevere so far despite the burglary and rotten food. Very nice, especially because that meant Bim gets to move in.
Glad you’ve finally got an update out! Can’t wait to see how the Chamchas are faring!
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Date: Oct. 14th, 2013 05:13 pm (UTC)Something like this was definitely in the cards I'm sure. Sal may not have seen it coming, but then again, he doesn't know quite as much about the other four as we do. He's quickly learning, though, and I don't think he quite believes what Seth is telling him, either. Yes, the bad guys are being selfish, although they didn't quite expect something like this to come out of their attempt to get out.
I'm pretty happy that I got lucky and got to lift Intelligence off the bat. I was originally planning for Natural Science (Sal has a snapdragon in his inventory), but on the whole, I think Intelligence may be even better. I'm glad to get to move Bim in, too.
Thanks for reading and commenting!