Update, at long last!

[katrisims]

It's been a while, hasn't it? Well, real life has been throwing me around this year some, as you probably know. But in the end, I still managed to pull an update together. Without further ado, here it is: Villains or heroes?, chapter one!



Again, bad guys use bad words occasionally, but shouldn't be extreme. Both Slideshare and Scribd versions available, whichever works best for you (to me, the picture quality on Scribd seems somewhat better). I hope you enjoy!

Comments

[esmeiolanthe.livejournal.com]

I like how you're giving Sal this chance to show another side of his personality. He will do anything and go through anything for the woman he loves, which can be admirable (as it is here) or very bad (as it is in the legacy). When that devotion gets warped, it's not a pretty sight. It seems like you're doing pretty well so far, although Sal can't have much time left before senility sets in... :(

Keep up the good work! :)

[katrisims.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :) I'm so glad you said that, because that's exactly what I'm going for! In different circumstances, Sal could be a perfectly okay guy, even an admirable one, but in the legacy things have gone ugly. I do think things are going pretty well so far, and I was really lucky to get to lift Intelligence first, but Sal is indeed a bit closer to his elder birthday than I'd ideally like... I sort of wish I'd had him take elixir from college, but oh well, you can't have everything.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^